Hi! So, the key to "showing" is using character action and/or facial expressions. Instead of saying "The news broke her heart," describe her body language when she hears the news. Do her shoulders slump? Does her mouth twist as she fights back tears? Do her hands shake? Does she stumble and have to grab the table to support herself? Those are all SHOWING. Hope that helps!
Hi! So, the key to "showing" is using character action and/or facial expressions. Instead of saying "The news broke her heart," describe her body language when she hears the news. Do her shoulders slump? Does her mouth twist as she fights back tears? Do her hands shake? Does she stumble and have to grab the table to support herself? Those are all SHOWING. Hope that helps!